Stating my opinion

In my opinion, it is harmful for mothers with small children to work outside of the house. First, there can be emotional disturbance to the children. Many experts say that children who have longer time with their mother have better emotional development. Second, children are always exposed to the various dangers for lack of judgments. Third, children who are apart from their mother usually have problems of sociality lack because sociality is based on the intimacy with family.

In my opinion, modern architecture is ugly. First reason, modern architecture too emphasizes practicality ignoring artistic quality. Second reason, modern architecture is too identical. As the result, each architecture does not have characteristic. Third reason, modern architecture uses too many harmful materials. So architecture has a harmful influence to modern people.
On the other hand, there is another view that modern architecture is not ugly. According to that view, there are several reasons. First, modern architecture emphasizes design. So, unique architecture matching the spirit of the times is created. Second, modern architecture improves urban environments for being harmony with the surroundings. Third, modern architecture uses green materials.

There is view that UFOs(unidentified flying objects) do exist. They present several reasons. First, there are many witnesses who have seen the unidentified flying objects. Second, there are many symptoms that science can’t explain in the world. Third, there exist pictures or moving pictures about UFO.
But in my opinion, UFOs don’t exist. First reason, existence of UFOs were not proved scientifically. Second reason, people sometimes think that they have seen something that does not exist. Third reason, there are many faked photos and moving pictures in the world.

In my opinion, smoking should be banned in restaurants. For one thing, smoking in restaurant gives unpleasant feeling to near people who would like to enjoy pleasant mood. In addition, smoking hurt neighbor’s health. According to experts’ opinions, indirect smoking is more harmful to health. Third, bad smell in a restaurant hurt fine environment.

In my opinion, nuclear energy is the best way to meet our energy needs. First, it is possible to get amount of energy using small materials because energy efficiency of nuclear energy is high. Second, nuclear energy safeguards environment of the earth because it does not produce carbon dioxide. Third, nuclear energy can replace a natural resource in the future.

Practice
1. For example, Child who have longer time with their mother have good emotional develop.
⇒ For example, children who spend longer time with their mother have better emotional development.
2. each architecture have not characteristic.
⇒ each architecture does not have a unique characteristic.
3. smoking in restaurant hurt fine environment for bad smells
⇒ smoking in restaurants hurts fine environment due to(because of) bad smells
4. I believe that drinking and driving is a serious crime
⇒ I believe that drunken driving is a serious crime
5. Those who were hit by a drunken driver’s car are afraid something like that might happen again
⇒ Those who were hit by a drunken driver’s car are afraid that a same accident might happen again
6. Drunken driver should awaken how much drinking and driving is dangerous.
⇒ drivers should be aware of how much drunk driving is dangerous.
7. Though someone committed a important crime, his punishment was enough to go to jail for a long time.
⇒ Even though someone commits a serious(brutal) crime, it is enough for him to go to jail for a long time.
8. there are many people to see the UFOs and lots of evidence of them.
⇒ there are many people who saw the UFOs and lots of evidence.
9. we can’t insist that the earth is only to have a civilization among the galaxies
⇒ we can’t insist that the earth only has a civilization among the galaxies
10. It’s a very difficult to maintain the wedding life with your spouse without a spiritual unification
⇒ It’s very difficult to maintain marriage without a spiritual unification
11. It gives stable of social.
⇒ It gives stability to society.
12. if one person commits crime, and there must be punishment.
⇒ if one person commits a crime, there must be a punishment.
13. a person who committed a brutal criminal is must punished in death penalty
⇒ a person who committed a brutal crime must be punished with(by) death penalty